I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Carez.I can see you have posted some work but I have no idea what it's in relation to.Can you add a comment to this so we know what you are focusing on?.It's great to see,but it would be helpful to the reader to know why you have blogged this work.
Ae, as Mrs Cassidy said - you could label it Tuhituhi and maybe put the picture up as well? Cool ides you have - how was your sister's birthday?
When you read the story starter - you need to carry it on in the same "person". So it started with "he" then you changed it to "I" like YOU were Professor Plum.... So keep it the same if that makes sense.
Kia ora Carez. I am just commenting on all the tamariki's blogs in ruma waru.I am looking forward to seeing what other learning you have been doing. Have a great week.
Hello Carez.I can see you have posted some work but I have no idea what it's in relation to.Can you add a comment to this so we know what you are focusing on?.It's great to see,but it would be helpful to the reader to know why you have blogged this work.
ReplyDeleteAe, as Mrs Cassidy said - you could label it Tuhituhi and maybe put the picture up as well?
ReplyDeleteCool ides you have - how was your sister's birthday?
When you read the story starter - you need to carry it on in the same "person". So it started with "he" then you changed it to "I" like YOU were Professor Plum.... So keep it the same if that makes sense.
Tau kē
Hello Carez.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.
Kia ora Carez.
ReplyDeleteI am just commenting on all the tamariki's blogs in ruma waru.I am looking forward to seeing what other learning you have been doing.
Have a great week.