I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Carez, wow! Tino pai e tama - your writing is very creative :) I think I would be sad too if I was the alligator losing his mum. I would love to get you to re read your tuhituhi and put in some full stops and capital letters so your sentences are not so long. That would make it easier to read, also can you find at the end where to put speech marks .. ? " "
Awesome job for your first day doing distance learning!
Kia ora Carez, wow! Tino pai e tama - your writing is very creative :) I think I would be sad too if I was the alligator losing his mum.
ReplyDeleteI would love to get you to re read your tuhituhi and put in some full stops and capital letters so your sentences are not so long. That would make it easier to read, also can you find at the end where to put speech marks .. ? " "
Awesome job for your first day doing distance learning!
Kia kaha, ngā mihi