I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Carez!! Ka rawe! This tuhutuhi is so exciting and I love the different words you have used it has really painted a picture in my mind about what is happening!
I want to know what is going to be in that hole.... ! Tino pai e tama, can't wait to see some more of your mahi.
It's great to see your work Carez. I love stories that make you feel as if things are happening to your own body as you read. I can't wait to read what the 'force' was.Was it a gnome that had the strength of 1000 men?.Maybe it was just an invisible force that couldn't bee seen. I look forward to more of your work.
Carez!! Ka rawe! This tuhutuhi is so exciting and I love the different words you have used it has really painted a picture in my mind about what is happening!
ReplyDeleteI want to know what is going to be in that hole.... !
Tino pai e tama, can't wait to see some more of your mahi.
It's great to see your work Carez.
ReplyDeleteI love stories that make you feel as if things are happening to your own body as you read.
I can't wait to read what the 'force' was.Was it a gnome that had the strength of 1000 men?.Maybe it was just an invisible force that couldn't bee seen.
I look forward to more of your work.