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Wednesday, April 15, 2020

Nille tuhtuhi


2 comments:

  1. Morena Carez.
    I missed you at karakia this morning.
    I found it very difficult to read your story.It is missing some punctuation and your sentences don't match.Can you reread to see where it needs to be corrected.
    Well done on putting up some work.It's great to read your blog.

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  2. You have some very creative ideas Carez
    Some really descriptive words too. I wonder what the smoldering ruins were on the second page? Keep an eye on the full-stops and capital letters and keep sharing your work

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