I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Morena Carez. I missed you at karakia this morning. I found it very difficult to read your story.It is missing some punctuation and your sentences don't match.Can you reread to see where it needs to be corrected. Well done on putting up some work.It's great to read your blog.
You have some very creative ideas Carez Some really descriptive words too. I wonder what the smoldering ruins were on the second page? Keep an eye on the full-stops and capital letters and keep sharing your work
Morena Carez.
ReplyDeleteI missed you at karakia this morning.
I found it very difficult to read your story.It is missing some punctuation and your sentences don't match.Can you reread to see where it needs to be corrected.
Well done on putting up some work.It's great to read your blog.
You have some very creative ideas Carez
ReplyDeleteSome really descriptive words too. I wonder what the smoldering ruins were on the second page? Keep an eye on the full-stops and capital letters and keep sharing your work